We screened our thriller to a focus group firstly. This was
beneficial, because we found out people’s views on out film, and how things
could be improved before screening it to the rest of the public.
Ruth aged 18 said “I liked the editing effects of the
torture scene. It made it look more realistic and scary.”
This was beneficial because we realised that we had used our
editing techniques effectively.
Kinga aged 18 said “The acting was really believable which
made it more creepy.”
This was beneficial because it showed us that we had done
well in picking actors that are/were drama students, so they would give us the
best results.
Brandon aged 18 said “The setting was so scary!”
This was also beneficial because we knew we had got the
desired emotion out of the audience, and we had done it through and eerie
setting.
Jake aged 18 said “The soundtrack could have been louder in
the build up to the scarier parts.”
This helped us to understand that the soundtrack needed to
actually scare the audience by making the soundtrack go from such a high volume
to literally nothing when the action kicks in.
Amy aged 18 said “Sometimes the lighting was a bit too dark
to see clearly.”
From this, we learnt that when low key lighting is used, it
needs to be really low, but not low enough to make the scene hard to see.
From receiving the feedback, I feel that overall we have
created a successful thriller. This is because
we followed most of the generic conventions of a typical thriller, and we received good feedback on most of
these.
Some good comments here from the feedback you received from your focus group. A good mixture of positive comments and constructive ones. Also pleasing and helpful for you to state how the feedback was beneficial in your assessing your own work.
ReplyDeleteTo improve;
-do you have any images you can include from your focus group?